All I Saw Was You

ghostwriter84 on Nov 23, 2010

Poem.

I walked these hallow halls with echoes of loneliness shouting back at me

And all I saw was you not there.

Your memory tearing apart my sodden soul

And all I saw was you not there.

Desperation nightmarishly coddling my once stout heart

And all I saw was you not there.

Screaming a single word to convince you to return

But all I saw was you not there.

Alone and scared.

All I saw was you not there.

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Comments (14)

cuddlypoo on Nov 23, 2010
Cool.
surymilan on Nov 23, 2010
i really like this sad poem
xyz999 on Nov 23, 2010
It’s a beautiful poem. Loneliness fills the air as one recites it. Great Post!
DarcAngeL on Nov 24, 2010
nice
john smither on Nov 24, 2010
Beautifully written.
Zsolt72 on Nov 24, 2010
very sad and scary in a way but I like!
SimplyShash on Nov 24, 2010
Wonderful worded poem with an unhappy end.
DR.VNS on Nov 24, 2010
Written with feeling
Brewed Coffee on Nov 26, 2010
Sad, but really beautiful. I felt the emotions there.
daydreamer13 on Nov 26, 2010
Powerful writing. Wonderful poem!
iamyna410 on Nov 28, 2010
Nice poem. I really like sad poems, quotes, etc. They are very heartfelt.
rivet32 on Nov 30, 2010
Very sad indeed; you write well thanks for sharing
UncleSammy on Nov 30, 2010
Wao is what i saw in this article – lovely
Monica Khuth on Jan 23, 2011
it sounds painful, the loneliness & the person not being there . I can relate . very good poem .

Hi there!