All Kinds of People I See at The Pool

sanaahmed on May 9, 2011

Tags: "polka-dot", Ice cream cone

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All kinds of people I see at the pool.

All kinds of people I see at the pool

Wearing suits that are polka dot, checkered and cool.

Their shapely bodies are slathered in lotion

Some swim laps with in a stealth rhythmic motion.

Muscled and scrawny. Tall and skinny

Pale or bronzed. Maxi and mini.

People read books. Guys and gals flirt and stare

At the sexy young lifeguard who sits in the chair.

Kids nagging moms for another ice cream cone

Moms want to rest, but they give in with a groan.

College kids body’s shine in the sun

No worries of tests, quizzes or being under the gun.

Baby oil, Banana Boat and Coppertone wafts in the air

Smelling like summer, lazy days without a care.

Pale bodies begin to turn pink, time to pack up and get ready to go.

The kids whining, one more dive, one more slide. No No No!

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Comments (22)

Dreamy777 on May 9, 2011
great one
CHIPMUNK on May 9, 2011
good
ravitej on May 9, 2011
nice poem
kawish on May 9, 2011
good work
zulfikar on May 9, 2011
interesting
xyz999 on May 9, 2011
You have described well the pool scenario. Nice !
prasul on May 9, 2011
Well written and beautiful description
mona rastogi on May 9, 2011
great work
anndavey650 on May 9, 2011
I loved this, rhyming poetry is my favourite lol!
fat4lity on May 9, 2011
nice post thank for share
neopisiva on May 9, 2011
Hot summer’s day…Nice one.
Cassle Tang on May 9, 2011
I really enjoy your poem! It\’s so refreshing! But I should add that on the bottom of the poem, the phrase \”No No No\” somewhat didn\’t match with previous sentences. Maybe if you work on that a little more, it will be a nice ending for this great work! Have a pleasant writing day!
Muhammad Fajar Marthias on May 9, 2011
GOOD work. Hope to read more from you…^_^
Sharif Ishnin on May 9, 2011
That’s pretty enjoyable and fun to read.
fat4lity on May 9, 2011
nice post thank for share
Ambi2010 on May 9, 2011
nice post.
chennysan on May 9, 2011
I like your lines and this time the pic too!
adicodrean1967 on May 9, 2011
great job
nabdsn on May 10, 2011
what a description!
multiplenews on May 10, 2011
Good dreamy world shared by you.
MaxBuceo on May 10, 2011
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http://socyberty.com/issues/in-40-minutes-it-fell-ger/

Thank you
sandynpj on May 18, 2011
very nice post

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