The make up of love is very simple.

What is that ingredient that just makes us click
I spent sometime searching the archives 
Looking for symbols and Da Vinci’s Code
No one really seems to know what it is that makes love 
taste astounding
I have heard some call it a fantastical notion
Get your head out of the clouds they would quip
Romance is only for the movies
Here in Everyday Land,
life is too hard to stare at the woman you love just 
because
Opening doors or rubbing her shoulders, even rubbing 
noses.
Sure glad I never believed the doubters 
Your eyes always had me convinced the ingredients we 
shared were rare.

We were made with sugar, spice and all spices nice.

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Comments (5)
  • drelayaraja on Nov 19, 2009

    Very nice composition, well presented.

  • ashan1614 on Nov 19, 2009

    Romance is alive and well. So long as the couple knows it, who cares what others may think?

  • mkd1788 on Nov 19, 2009

    good one man……

  • diamondpoet on Nov 19, 2009

    I liked very good.

  • TroostAvenue on Nov 20, 2009

    Poem went together quite nicely.

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