The aching of my heart.

I trace these steps,
Over and over,
Lingering in the shadow,
You left behind.
You left me behind,
With no one to comfort me,
No one to hold me,
No one to love me.
The aching of my heart,
Always eased when you were near,
But now you’re gone,
And the aching has worsened.
I cried for you to stay,
I screamed out your name,
But my words,
They went right through you.
I had made you a promise,
To make everyday fun,
But that promise faded away,
When you left me alone.

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Comments (5)
  • Ruby Hawk on Jun 28, 2008

    Expressed very well, very nice.

  • quiet voice on Jun 30, 2008

    ..nicely written, tho’ sad.
    Take care.

  • Lucy Lockett on Jul 6, 2008

    Very sad!

  • warAngel01 on Jul 26, 2008

    sad poem I can realt.

  • jayyyy on Jan 11, 2009

    wow that was very deep and sad you can express such emotion in your writing your very talented

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