It is the loneliness that makes the loudest noise.

Sitting in my pink castle

A high window to gaze from

Me and my dreams

Wating for my hero to come.


Not a shadow of soul to talk with

No one even to grasp

The pink castle keeps me safe

But its silence is making me deaf.


Wishes are blocked in the walls

They never reaches to the  ears of my God

Every day is so same

Living alone in four walled castle


I can only imagine

How it feels to be there

The pure earth beneath me

The cool wind in my hair.


If only I had wings

I will fly high without ceasing

Leaving this all behind

Singing and never reliving same day


I never care how hard i try

It’s okay if nothing be realize

I’ll be forever alone in my pink castle

Waiting for my hero.




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  • girishpuri on Jan 15, 2012

    here i come ….lol

  • megamatt09 on Jan 15, 2012

    Pretty good.

  • Ruby Hawk on Jan 15, 2012

    Don’t wait, get out there and live. Seriously, I liked your poem.

  • erwinkennythomas on Jan 15, 2012

    wonderful

  • ittech on Jan 15, 2012

    Very well done.

  • Jay F. Samson on Jan 16, 2012

    beautiful!

  • aheed411 on Jan 16, 2012

    Magnificence of

  • ittech on Jan 16, 2012

    I thank you. It is nice to see it.

  • conundrum on Jan 16, 2012

    I can feel the emotions that you’re trying to convey and you got me at that! Truly, silence is deafening but the reverberating sound of that emptiness makes you realized that all the things occurring in this world has a purpose and nobody knows what lies ahead. I rely in destiny co’z whatever effort we do in life, if it’s not meant to pass then it won’t! So keep the faith and put your trust in “Him”! Great poem!

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