Scary sensations.

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Out here in the cemetery,

the night is very frightening.

I can sense an evil presence,

as I roam here all alone.

Chills course down my spine,

as a growl sounds in the darkness.

I weave among the tombstones,

wishing I were anywhere but here.

Is the moonlight playing tricks,

or are these sensations all real?

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  • Kairos on Jun 24, 2009

    O Darla, you seemed to be in a halloween mood…

  • rajeev bhargava on Jun 24, 2009

    a very creepy poem. i enjoyed reading it ALOT. thanks for sharing!!

  • Milton H Peebles III on Jun 24, 2009

    I remember a night in the grave yard. I was fine, until I tripped and fell on my face.

  • ken bultman on Jun 24, 2009

    They’re real.

  • goodselfme on Jun 24, 2009

    great imagery.

  • scout on Jun 24, 2009

    A nice piece of imagery Darla,spooky.

  • Deep Blue on Jun 24, 2009

    Nice idea. The cemetery is really one silent place to reflect.

  • STEVE666 on Jun 24, 2009

    There’s vampires in them grave-yards, Darla!

  • stumbleuponwriter on Jun 24, 2009

    It is indeed such a lonely feeling whenever one is in a grave yard. Gives me the chills too at times..thanks for sharing, Darla..

  • chanbox on Jun 24, 2009

    Eerie. accurate. Love it

  • Lesanndra on Jun 25, 2009

    nice atmosphere…chilly ;)

  • kate smedley on Jun 25, 2009

    Scary poem, not the place to be in the dark!

  • HAhA on Jun 25, 2009

    What utter drivel

  • Francy on Jun 25, 2009

    well done.
    Thanks for sharing.

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