Always, Forever Faithfully

Liane Schmidt on Oct 1, 2008

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With you, my love and fairytale dream.

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If I was to touch
Your ocean
Dip deeply

In-to

The gems of your sea
I wonder if, or when, or how
Your caress could forever

Change me

In my heart
Somehow, I know,
With you, my vision
Would cascade
Innocent and free

And, in your arms
Those that entwine
My small form
I would melt away

In-to
Evergreen lands and divinity

Close your eyes,
Breathe in deeply
Just two small steps,
Closer to me

Only two small glances
And, I promise you, my love
I will always be yours
Forever faithfully

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mdegenhardt on Oct 1, 2008
Liane, this reads so very well! The tone seems to be a natural soft romantic one, whereby the voice opauses gently and monetarily upon each syllable, thereby supporting the romantic sentiment of the write. This is struly one beautiful read. Michael
CHAN LEE PENG on Oct 1, 2008
Great poem!Take care!
B Nelson on Oct 1, 2008
Nice poem Liane and perfect photo to go with it.
MMV Abad on Oct 1, 2008
I always did love the way you choose your pictures. Another lovely poem of yours, too!
papaleng on Oct 1, 2008
simple choice of words, short yet so romantic.. very impressive Liane..
Winged Lead on Oct 1, 2008
Liane- A gorgeous poem of the heart and soul.
jo oliver on Oct 1, 2008
beautiful !!!!!!!!
goodselfme on Oct 1, 2008
Your words are So smoothly placed together forming such a pretty picture in my mind. The photo is well selected too.
Paula Mitchell-Mitchell on Oct 1, 2008
This poem is lovely. You’re truly gifted.
Will Gray on Oct 1, 2008
Very beautifully written abd so full of true emotion. Fantastic!
Lauren Axelrod on Oct 1, 2008
Another wonder piece of prose Liane. The words float like a love song.
gabbic1219 on Oct 1, 2008
this is beautiful,i love your form and its graceful and serene!
ANDY-N on Oct 1, 2008
I like it!
Will Davis on Oct 2, 2008
I love this as mch as you love Dreams
eddiego65 on Oct 2, 2008
Simply beautiful! I like it!
Jessica Rowe on Oct 2, 2008
Great poem, such beauty
Susan B. Anna on Oct 2, 2008
This was really beautiful.
Darlene McFarlane on Oct 3, 2008
So beautiful and passionate.
NA Staffieri on Oct 3, 2008
Very touching. You have talent.
GodBless on Oct 4, 2008
now that’s a poem…
very well done
Anne Lyken-Garner on Oct 4, 2008
Melodic and sweet
Jackie Stroud-Painter on Oct 5, 2008
Very sweet.
Melody Arcamo Lagrimas on Oct 8, 2008
Flows and reads like a passionate love song. It is beautiful!
Brian S on Oct 20, 2008
Very beautiful.
Susan Orr Parker on Nov 9, 2008
Just lovely!

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