A simple pledge to you.x.

I would walk over water to be by your side,
Give you my love, when you have been denied.
Take your hand and lead you, away from sorrow,
Show you the meaning of a new tomorrow.

I will be your sunshine, on every rainy day,
Will never leave you, unless you say.
I would climb the mountain and back down again,
Be your cover, if it should rain.

Give you fresh flowers so you can smile,
To hold your love,I would walk the mile.
Be the brightest star, that shines down on you,
I will always treasure your love. it will be the last thing I do….

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  • megamatt09 on Apr 3, 2011

    Excellent work.

  • jimbob1 on Apr 3, 2011

    Judi…what a wonderful love song…it is an incredible expression of the depth of affection one has for another…the deep intensity of this powerful poem is so much more than just a “simple pledge” from one person to another…I love this piece beyond words – unfortunately I can only vote that I like it, something which I have already done…thanks and take care

  • foxpete88 on Apr 3, 2011

    good work….thanks for sharing.-

  • Christine Ramsay on Apr 3, 2011

    So beautiful and romantic. Lovely work.

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