Well, am I?

Am I wrong?
If I end my life
Am I wrong?
If I give up this fight
No one will notice
No one will care
I am one in many
Who live on this Earth
An insignificant vessel
Of a corrupted soul
A living disillusionment
Too late to help
This is my life
This is my choice
I have every right
To end my life
No one controls me
No one owns me
Just think of it this way
You have one less sinner to save
A thinning of the herd
You will soon forget
With no regrets
The Earth still turning
Life goes on
Live and let live
Live and let die
Just let me be
This is my life

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Comments (9)
  • giftarist on Sep 16, 2009

    Yeah, you control your decision (rights), but it’s wrong (my view) to end or give up life. Live on – live life to the fullest.

  • agriculi on Sep 16, 2009

    There is always more people who care for you than you think.

  • Christine Ramsay on Sep 16, 2009

    You may feel that way right now, but there are a lot of people who would care if they knew you felt like this. You just need someone to listen to you.

    Christine

  • ken bultman on Sep 16, 2009

    It is not your life. You did not give it to you and you will not take it from you. Think about it.

  • mystery61 on Sep 16, 2009

    I think you are wrong! Think about it. I’m sure there are some people out there that do care about you!

  • Sourav on Sep 16, 2009

    You are wrong. Yes you are. You are in the negative mind set. Anyways I hope it’s just a poem!

  • Lostash on Sep 16, 2009

    I’m sure this is just a poem from our Lady! But the issues at hand are far more complicated than one can imagine. As I’ve said before, I worked as a volunteer in this field…and it changes your opinion on many things.

  • Shirley Shuler on Sep 16, 2009

    Hi Lady Sunshine, I know this is a poem, we poets write about many things, including life and death and this is just one of many, as I read between the lines, I see the writing of a poet expressing herself and nothing more! Well done my friend!!

  • Lady Sunshine on Sep 17, 2009

    Thank you to everyone who took the time to read and comment. As for this piece, it is a poem, but a deeply personal one…and I’ll just leave it at that.

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