Am⋅ne⋅sia /æmˈniʒə/ [am-nee-zhuh]. Loss of a large block of interrelated memories.

No more words are left to be said

No more tears to be shed

Just more pain as every day passes

Like I would faint any minute, I guess

I’ve been this way before you came into my life

I’ve been alone and sad once in a while

Until you found me one of my darker days

You kissed me “til the morning light

And held me in your arms, so tight

You showed me how colorful the world can be

But now, black and white is all I see

“Coz there’s no more you in me

No more me in you, probably

So what is left of you and I

are memories alone to live by

Yet I always want to banish you

From my mind, from my life

And I thought I have forgotten you

but somehow, I suppose I forgot to

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  • Betty Carew on Jun 7, 2009

    Nice peom Rizz

  • JoseI on Jun 7, 2009

    nice job.

  • deep blue on Jun 7, 2009

    Nice poem with interesting title. Sort of like forgetting something you just remember.

  • Jenny Heart on Jun 7, 2009

    Nicely done!Keep up the good work.

  • Pinaki Ghosh on Jun 7, 2009

    Great work.

  • rutherfranc on Jun 7, 2009

    need a bump on the head? call me..

  • California Dreamer on Jun 8, 2009

    Nicely written :)

  • George W Whitehead on Jun 8, 2009

    Nice poem, rizz.

  • clay hurtubise on Jun 8, 2009

    Nice job.
    Thanks,
    Clay

  • goodselfme on Jun 8, 2009

    You carry this messages within this piece so well. The title is a wonderful choice too.

  • richard reed on Jun 8, 2009

    very nice write..I truly enjoyed it,,thanks 4 the share…your friend and fan Rich…stay blessed..

  • Poetic Enigma on Jun 8, 2009

    great poem,
    really well written!

  • CA Johnson on Jun 8, 2009

    This is a beautiful poem, rizzei. I really enjoyed reading this.

  • Ruby Hawk on Jun 10, 2009

    young love can be wonderful and is often heartbreaking. Well said.

  • CHAN LEE PENG on Jun 11, 2009

    Lovely and unique poem! Keep it up! Give you “liked it”.

  • John McDonnell on Jun 11, 2009

    I like this. It has a nice flow, and it’s bittersweet. Good work.

  • Lesanndra on Jun 11, 2009

    great show of emotion…..

  • lh on Jun 17, 2009

    beautifully naughty ,

    for a 16 year old

  • eliza on Jun 24, 2009

    good writing..

  • Momma Tells on Jun 27, 2009

    You have a knack for poems. Like it!

  • shon on Jul 7, 2009

    forgetting means you have forgiven

  • herdy on Aug 2, 2009

    o ayan na-visit ko na.. ok! haha joke.. cge na magaling ka na hehe..

  • Shana on Aug 2, 2009

    Wow! Nice poem. Kinda bitter but it expresses a strong feeling anyone can relate to. Just like me, haha..

  • msterious13 on Sep 20, 2009

    HEY Rizzei????
    Are you my lost twin sister??

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