Among the Buttercups

Mark Gordon Brown on Feb 3, 2009

Tags: Frolic, ideas, intentions, playful, poem, Poetry, snowman, snowmen

About a playful snowman, and frolicking.

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Snowmen frolicking,
through ox-eyed daisies and buttercups.
It is so very bucolic,
yet no one dares question
their intentions?
They are cruel?
They are tainted?
They are out-dated!
We don’t have time
for their questions!
Yet, no one bothers
to question their intentions?
Then again, why do you force that point?
Consistently force that point.
Go frolic with those same snowmen!

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Blue Buttefly on Feb 3, 2009
Are they messing about Mark? Unique poem!
Ruby Hawk on Feb 3, 2009
Snow men have no business frolicking with daisies and buttercups. Chase them away, the scamps.
Riley Themend on Feb 3, 2009
This is a very interesting poem. I like it very much.
Mr Ghaz on Feb 4, 2009
Excellent! nice and creative poem! Well done
Vikram Chhabra on Feb 5, 2009
I was very uplifted by reading this. It was light and yet meaningful in a playful sort of way. Thanks for writing it!!
Chris Stonecipher on Feb 18, 2009
Mark,
I love your creativity in your poems! It is not always as what it appears to be.
eddiego65 on Feb 28, 2009
Nice. Creative and original.
revivor on Feb 28, 2009
Like your flow and use of words
Good poem – revivor
Theresa Johnson on Jul 30, 2009
very good poem. very funny
Shelly Barclay on Jul 30, 2009
LOL, I really like this.
maranatha on Jul 30, 2009
Out-dated? Never, I hope. Very sharp, I like it.
Katie Marie on Jul 30, 2009
Very fun!!
littlemama76 on Jul 30, 2009
very original and fun write
David Crerand on Jul 30, 2009
we all deserve a good frolic. Fun piece.
Cebah on Jul 31, 2009
An original and quirky poem.
Karen Gross on Aug 1, 2009
Sounds to me like your inner child wants to come out and play.

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