God Demands more then just ok in our lives. This poem it’s as rough as God’s rath is we’re not. it’s very polite. But it’s still a serious thing.

Now life is good

I think I’m fine

and I really should

Not cross the line

But I have not

The line’s not crossed

I’ve done a lot

Of good, I’m not lost

I’m better then

Your average man

I’m not like most

Go head and scan

my life all through

You’ll find that I’m Ok

What could I do

and what could I say

But if i’m Ok

That that’s not good

To be much more

That’s what i should

You need the best

You want all of me

All and the rest

God, I am for thee

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  • Damien Riley on Apr 14, 2011

    Very nice poem and well written

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