An Appeal

Sourav on Oct 6, 2009

Tags: An Appeal, Life, Poetry, soul, Sourav RC

Poetry By Sourav RC.

Paint me in your colour
In this bloody hour
Before the soul fades away
Revive it like a flower.

Awake me from my sleep
Save from my nightmare
Before my screams destroy this world
Touch my heart with your flair.

Teach me your lesson again
Set the mind free of confusion
Before I acquire the diabolic art
Seal my fate with your conclusion.

Give me the dream that you dreamt
While you were creating me
Before I get blinded by the death
That dream I want to be

Show me you are real
Burn the veil of secrecy
Come forth with your power
Prove- you’re not just a fantasy.

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Darla Cooke on Oct 6, 2009
Interesting poem.
ken bultman on Oct 6, 2009
If you get proof, then you won’t have faith. Without faith……..
Guy Hogan on Oct 6, 2009
This poem seems to have the power of destruction and the power of healing love in it.
ashan1614 on Oct 6, 2009
Ken is right – but then again, sometimes just enough is revealed to strengthen our faith. Then we can hold out a little while longer.

I really am intrigued by this one, Sourav. Thank you for sharing.
friendshipter on Oct 6, 2009
wow.. compelling..
Frances Lawrence on Oct 6, 2009
That is beautiful!
Mary Patricia Bird on Oct 6, 2009
Very nice.
Madison Parker on Oct 7, 2009
Beautiful. We’ll get the proof someday; hopefully not too soon.
Christine Ramsay on Oct 7, 2009
A dramatic piece. Well done.

Christine
chitragopi on Oct 7, 2009
He proves His presence in several ways. We have to burn the veil. Beautiful poem
giftarist on Oct 7, 2009
Nicely done..interesting!
LOVELYHONEY on Oct 7, 2009
ur BEYOND me/my comprehension poor me

JUST LOVELY
LOVELYHONEY on Oct 7, 2009
the more i read

the less i understand

but to gain knowledge

is my main stand

some day

i will also understand

READ IT SECOND TIME TODAY

JUST WONDERFUL

FRIEND UR AN ANGEL
Moses Ingram on Oct 11, 2009
I like it.
Kitty Starwizard on Oct 11, 2009
what can I say…no veil in time…time is all we have…my dreams have created you over and over…let me into some of yours…kitty
Priyanka.dk on Oct 24, 2009
Great Poem!

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