An apple is a powerful metaphor for a person who we eventually end up with for life. For many in the Western world we have one choice through marriage to get it right. If that breaks down some believe it is bad.

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What an apple!

I’ve searched

All over the world

For you

- – -

I’ve visited many orchards

On undulating slopes

With a variety of trees

Until I decided

To pick you

- – -

Apples are of different varieties

They range from beet red

Yellow and green

Some are blended

Which are exciting to behold

- – -

Although you’re the apple of my eye

Sometimes amidst the orchards of life

I would view other apples

In admiration

“What beauties!”  I would say

- – -

A wise friend of mine

Once said

“We’re free

To examine the menu

As long as we don’t touch”

- – -

It takes love, discipline

And commitment my friend

Because you made

Your choice when you picked

Your apple for life

- – -
If you do otherwise

You’ll end up

Discarding apple after apple

Cover of Apples

That’s beautiful

Giving humankind a bad name

By your fickle behavior

- – -

Some believe the apple was the fruit

Which got Adam and Eve

Into trouble in the Garden of Eden

- – -

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Comments (16)
  • Muzammil196 on Dec 31, 2011

    Nicely written… an apple of my eye! :)

  • megamatt09 on Dec 31, 2011

    Very well written.

  • prsol46 on Dec 31, 2011

    That’s very sweet! Nice work!

  • aheed411 on Dec 31, 2011

    Terrible

  • mphsglo on Dec 31, 2011

    Very nice words for thought.

  • Christine Ramsay on Dec 31, 2011

    A lovely poem and so true.

  • Margaret Boseroy on Dec 31, 2011

    Interesting metaphor for the one you love.

  • straw1979 on Dec 31, 2011

    nice poem

  • indianwriting on Dec 31, 2011

    that’s adam’s apple for you :) ….nice one

  • Avik Chattopadhyay on Dec 31, 2011

    Thanks for the share…. i liked it

  • LoveDoctor on Dec 31, 2011

    I love the image you used to portray this piece. I don’t know why I’m smiling as I’m reading the ending. It’s true if you think about it, if men were to act upon their feelings, then they would be discarding apple after apple.

  • lapasan on Jan 1, 2012

    We should make a careful choice so that we would only have one apple in our eyes.

  • Martin Kloess on Jan 1, 2012

    Happy New Year

  • yes me on Jan 1, 2012

    True to the core cheers

  • iva75cpb on Jan 2, 2012

    So true.
    Happy New Year!

  • FX777222999 on Jan 2, 2012

    Its an essence of their lives, for other people.

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