An Atheist’s Life

Abhichoco on Mar 29, 2009

Tags: atheists, defunct, faith, God, satans, terror

This is the poem I wrote for the atheist’s.I’m presenting the frightful situation that would have existed if the gods never existed. “FAITH HELPS”. Peace.

Title:An Atheist’s Life

The thoughts that come to the mind of a sinner,now

Ain’t no different from that of a child,

The heights of insanity have been reached,

The Satans have taken over and terror has been redefined.

The warden of the Earth is a rogue,

Caitiffs shall no longer see punish,

Peace is now a long gone fetish,

Philanthropy is gone with peace and is now a felony.

Hitler is no longer history’s greatest villan,

Flowers now bloom for the Satans,

The defunct cry tears from hell,which rains on the mortals below,

Spring and Love have now both been doused.

A young child watches with unblinking eyes,

The heart-rendering scenes of his mother being tortured and killed,

But finds elation in his heart as he realises he’ll be next,

To receive the barbarous wrath of this slaying fest…..

The child woke up with egregious pain in his soul,

He stood destituted in front of the largest mirror,

And on the mirror had been written,

“Thou cannot survive sans a god”.

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Fresh Writing on Mar 29, 2009
“Intriguing…”

I’m presuming you’re not an atheist yourself?

-Fresh Writing
Fresh Writing on Mar 29, 2009
Interesting how you ended it with a quote, by the way- more specifically, mysterious how it’s on a mirror…symbolic and/or deliberation of message?

Excellent work!

-Fresh Writing
alt1977 on Mar 29, 2009
I am not an athiest but I felt every word that you wrote. I liked how you wrote this, it was well written. Good job.
l0g1calc0nfl1ct on Mar 30, 2009
i told u why i liked it n why i ddnt… guess it says it all. keep writing d00d… \m/
flash on Apr 3, 2009
wow intense. well done man. i also liked how it was written on a mirror. very cool.
CHAN LEE PENG on Apr 4, 2009
Neither me as an athiest too. You gave an impressive view on this issue. Keep it up!
Elizabeth Abbott on Apr 4, 2009
You really do have alot of emotions in your words, Poetry is absolutely real for you. I honestly believe that themore you write the greater you will become.
papaleng on Apr 5, 2009
you have expressed your thought it a very nice way and you have guts to write on a very delicate topic..
Melynda Sorrels on May 31, 2009
I am an atheist. It isn’t nice to knock other people’s beliefs or lack thereof. I don’t gear my writings towards trying to scare Christians and Christians of all people should know better and do the same.
Try spell-check next time. It could have been an interesting piece of literature if it flowed better and wasn’t so filled with prejudice references. It seems as though you are trying too hard to use “big words” where they don’t fit. Find a less debatable topic, write better, and maybe I’ll look at your writing again one day. Until then, I don’t feel like being singled out with bad poetry.

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