In memory of my girlfriend’s cousin.

The heavens shed tears that night.
It was mourning for me.

The world had stopped. No, it hadn’t.
I had stopped and the world had left me.

Her tears won’t bring me back.
But it would be good for her to cry.

To wash her eyes, her soul, her heart.
And afterwards wipe them to dry.

And emerge as a stronger woman
To fight against those who want me gone
and punish those who let me die.

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  • Abby Rose on Jun 3, 2008

    very powerful

  • Sydney Hazelton on Jul 18, 2008

    Very moving..

  • Richie Montalbo on Jul 24, 2008

    Abby Rose, Sydney, thank you for your kind words.

  • Brigid on Jul 29, 2008

    beautiful.

  • TheMyth on Aug 2, 2008

    Move on! =] Forget the past =]

  • Lauren Axelrod on Sep 17, 2008

    This is quite powerful. Well written and with a message.

  • Richie Montalbo on Sep 21, 2008

    Thanks Brigid, TheMyth and Lauren.

    You are very much appreciated.

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