A wound to the heart that may never heal.

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Devastation does not come close to describe how I feel.

This is one wound I doubt will ever heal.

My heart is wounded beyond repair.

Why does life have to be so unfair?

What did I do to be treated in such a way?

Like a person not worthy to breathe another day.

The tears are continuous down my face.

What makes me less desirable to embrace?

Questions I may never know the answers to.

What I do know for sure is,

the one that loses is you.

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  • LOVELYHONEY on Oct 2, 2010

    today perchance
    i revive my old association
    since the flame of time
    my heart hath burned

    i do still remember u
    i wonder if u doooooooo

  • jimbob1 on Oct 2, 2010

    DB…I voted that I like this poem…not necessarily the depressing message, but definitely the effort…none of us are ever always dealt a winning hand and I agree that sometimes life does seem unfair…but I wouldn’t consider you less desireable to embrace so dry up that tear-stained face…lucky the man who gets the opportunity to wrap you up in a loving embrace…

  • notsoloco on Oct 2, 2010

    Tho things were wrong
    Dont sing that song
    for you will orvercome.
    Dont let them see you cry, go into stealth.
    You will surely see. Just trust your heart,
    dont fall apart, and take care of yourself..

    Sometimes we try to hard for others, maybe its time for you?
    You will overcome.

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