An Ode to Triond

lillyrose on Dec 4, 2009

Tags: ode, Poetry, triond

Oh Triond every morning to ye I come
To sit in my chair upon my big bum.

Oh Triond every morning to ye I come

To sit in my chair upon my big bum

I am always, always trying to get perfect

But I am me and my articles I collect

Oh Triond I love you so much my dear

But shouts of woe and woo and wee I hear

I type and type but not much good comes

Waiting for my big break to sound to drums

Just another great hit to top the thousand views

I could then smile and chase away the blues

You are the maker of bread and butter

For you I just won’t spit and splutter

I see you working hard though day and night

Sometimes I think you look a dreadful fright

But on and on the slippery treadmill you roam

Until at last the publishing’s done and you press home

My Ode to you Triond my friend

The rules maybe a little we can bend

Crack on with the publishing sweetie please

Can you just for one second stop being a tease!

I will crack this Ode writing if it kills me!

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ken bultman on Dec 4, 2009
Just like on a Grecian urn. Very nicely done. Glad it wasn’t an elegy.
cardy on Dec 4, 2009
I love this what a great poem! I know these words very well lol. great work from you.
Vincent Eggleston Jr on Dec 4, 2009
lol good job.
Bo Russo on Dec 4, 2009
That just about nailed it! I love it!
LoveDoctorGoodBye on Dec 4, 2009
Great job! Where’s my cash? lol
Themax on Dec 4, 2009
ha ha! great funny poem also nice heading ha ha:)
magicdarts on Dec 4, 2009
Oh come all ye faithful , triond and triumphant – fab:)
Teves on Dec 4, 2009
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Valerie Curtiss on Dec 4, 2009
Viva Lily Rose! I think we all have this problem
The Last Ogre on Dec 4, 2009
Great one, Lilly. Well said!
Authoress Terry E. Lyle on Dec 4, 2009
Lol…nicely said.
MDalton on Dec 4, 2009
So we all are just making ourselves content . Well it lease you guys are listening
Brenda Nelson on Dec 4, 2009
I feed my critters first.. then triond – right on schedule, pretty much every day. fun ode.
AlmaG on Dec 4, 2009
That’s what I do too as soon as I get up in the morning haha!

@ magic darts….Oh come all ye faithful , triond and triumphant

Haha! really funny
Guy Hogan on Dec 4, 2009
You’ve said it all right here. Now I have to get back to work.
Mr Ghaz on Dec 4, 2009
Great work! Nicely done. ..wish you all the best my friend..cheers
Anuradha Ramkumar on Dec 4, 2009
Excellent ode to triond. It is definitely my bread and butter too. Getting back to work now.
ashan1614 on Dec 4, 2009
Funny, but true. Thankfully, I’m not counting on Triond for my bread and butter – I’d be in the poor house by now.
jimbob1 on Dec 5, 2009
Miss L…Wonderful rhyme dedicated to the powers that be…It never ceases to amaze me how you come up with such a unique variety of subjects…amazing – simply amazing. Thanks.
Christine Ramsay on Dec 5, 2009
I know how you feel, but I think you’ve almost cracked it with this one. Well done.

Christine
PhoenixRox on Dec 5, 2009
U did it Lill..A perfect ode to Triond..ha ha.
svishnugopal on Dec 5, 2009
wonderful ode, i just came back to triond after a break.. and nice to read such an article..thanks
Wennie Estares on Dec 5, 2009
ha.ha.ha.ha.LOL
Francois Hagnere on Dec 5, 2009
Excellent and so true! I agree with ashan, I’m counting on triond for my bread and butter either…
Bravo Lilly!
diamondpoet on Dec 5, 2009
Great ode, and word that are so true, you hit the nail on the head.
Papa Sparks on Dec 5, 2009
Very well said and expressed.
Darla Cooke on Dec 5, 2009
Excellent ode!
Frances Lawrence on Dec 5, 2009
A funny poem, well written.
STEVE666 on Dec 7, 2009
A quirky ode, Lisa.
An apple for the teacher, hey?

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