An unconventional love poem.

I need you as much as you need me,

Without you I am nothing;

Inanimate and cold.

Take me in your hand,

Morning, noon and night.

Let me see your smile,

Pearly and white.

Let your five fingers surround me,

Until just my head remains.

Give me passage through your lips,

Let me wash away life’s stains.

In the soft warmth of your mouth,

Tease me gently up and down.

A minute, two, or three,

I’m only wet when you’re with me.

I love you.

You’re my everything.

Your Toothbrush.

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Comments (4)
  • raman13 on Oct 5, 2009

    good

    very good

  • cafftee on Oct 5, 2009

    Nice one, I was beginning to wonder where you were going with that one though! :o )

  • Katie Marie on Oct 5, 2009

    Very creative. Glad that you and your toothbrush have such an intimate relationship. :-)

  • oldster on Oct 5, 2009

    Three times a day and they’ll sparkle–or drop out.
    Nice one ^5

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