It is rare to find a happy vampire.

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An Undead Man

4 November 09

Life is gone and cannot come back

Strife is here and does not give slack

Within his dead heart does pound so loud

Within his mind he does scream so proud

Tormented he seeks his love again

Fermenting she rots in grave within

He walks undead living for a sin

She decays without him to blend

He wants to die he wants to live

He wants his torture to you he give

Destroys lives forever

Saves himself never

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  • Petalm on Nov 4, 2009

    Wow, very well written.

  • alc on Nov 4, 2009

    Loved this and the picture!

  • raptor22 on Nov 4, 2009

    Quite horrific. Great writing.

  • PR Mace on Nov 4, 2009

    An outstanding late dark Halloween treat. Well done.

  • Darla Cooke on Nov 5, 2009

    Wow! Great poem!

  • Jane Jane on Nov 8, 2009

    nice piece. seems like you love this type of poems.

  • Craigz on Nov 20, 2009

    Good writing. I know a real witch in Arkansas.

  • CutestPrincess on Nov 21, 2009

    so nicely done… you really have talent

  • Palestrya on Jun 4, 2011

    Nice one!

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