A once in a lifetime experience!

We enter a world like none other
Birds chirping
Roaring lions
Monkeys chittering
Pleasant havoc
A deep inner feeling of peace
Waterfalls crashing and eroding rocks
Penguins waddling
Gigantic giraffes feasting
Dolphins gracefully dancing in the water
Wonderful aroma of buttery popcorn
Feeling the zesty taste of cotton candy melt in my mouth
Sitting on the lush green grass
We chattered and chattered and chattered
Minutes into hours
The sun as yellow as a yolk slides behind the massive mountains
Realizing time has come
We feel an utter feeling of sadness
Leaving a realm of peaceful nature
One magnificent day has past, but will come again

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  • Ruby Hawk on Jan 7, 2010

    I loved your poem, We appreciate every beautiful day, and it is sad to see the it end but we have tomorrow to look forward to.

  • James DeVere on Jan 7, 2010

    Just perfect . You are a million times better a poet than author of articles; that’s for sure.

    Simply perfect . j

  • maranatha on Jan 8, 2010

    We also enjoyed a trip to the zoo not long ago – first time in years.

  • C00L P3RS0N on Jan 8, 2010

    Nice article dude! Awesome writing… sheer skill shown in every word written.

  • Rohan Agrawal on Jan 8, 2010

    Thanks guys!

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