And I Don’t Know Why

Kip Spleen on Nov 11, 2009

A poem I whipped up this morning.

surgical precision

sterilized opinions

room is spinning faster

and i don’t know why

quite uncertain outlook

road i shouldn’t have took

now its rain and darkness

and i don’t know why

castle built from chaos

gaining at the clear loss

order or obey now

and i don’t know why

come around to bright light

blinks unblur my weak sight

they ask me if i’m okay

and i don’t know why

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Comments (5)

cardy on Nov 11, 2009
Glad you did like it, nice work
Darla Cooke on Nov 11, 2009
Interesting poem.
wonder on Nov 11, 2009
A meaningful one.
Frances Lawrence on Nov 12, 2009
I like this poem, it has an out of control sort of feeling.
Authoress Terry E. Lyle on Nov 17, 2009
“I don’t know why, but I found that poem to be charming” LOL

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