Can this be love that I am feeling inside, or just a simple dream vanished in confusion beyond the horizon of mirage and illusion.

I saw you in my dream, same face, same place and same dress.

Your face gleamed with sunrays crowning your hair as the sun sets.

When finally the darkness spread you walked away passing right of me,

You throw me a glance and I saw tears in your eyes.

I wanted to ask why and wish to make you stay for a while.

But you walked briskly, so I followed silently confused with a sigh.

Looking at your footprints as the sea waves washed it away from my sight,

I stopped and looked up, and oh, I lost your track.

I looked around but you were nowhere to found.

I run and run oh baby where you are gone.

 I stumbled, fall, and feel the pain in my mind.

All of the sudden I woke up from sleep, feeling missed, and feeling scared.

I sit down trying to convinced myself you are real,

I stood up; walked towards my window and stare the heaven.

There you are looking down from the sky with smile on your lips.

I stretched my hand to touch your face but then again you fade.

Are you real or you just merely a dream?

If so, I wish my nights would never end and be with you forever.

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Comments (24)
  • Boyka on Oct 21, 2011

    nice share I Like It

  • dwisuka on Oct 21, 2011

    so sweet. You have my ‘like’ :)

  • dazzlejazz on Oct 21, 2011

    Yes, lovely words! What a beautiful dream.

  • VoIP on Oct 21, 2011

    Pretty.

  • bhabycatch013 on Oct 21, 2011

    nice work

    i hate when i dream and can’t remember it the next day hahaha

  • Margaret Boseroy on Oct 21, 2011

    Beautiful.

  • Aroosa Gloomy on Oct 21, 2011

    Wonderful.

  • dhuglho on Oct 21, 2011

    very good poem, i

  • Suni51 on Oct 21, 2011

    Dreaming of some one who is up there in heaven? Oh I can do that as my went to meet his maker this day last year. You remind me of him.

  • CHIPMUNK on Oct 21, 2011

    Excellent one love the pic

  • tonywriter on Oct 21, 2011

    good work friend

  • Sunjhini on Oct 21, 2011

    what a beautiful write. loved it

  • megamatt09 on Oct 21, 2011

    Rather lovely words.

  • LoveDoctor on Oct 21, 2011

    I would say that you\’ve been caught by the love bug. Nice work.

  • malone on Oct 21, 2011

    lovely poem…keep it up :p

  • lovely on Oct 21, 2011

    awesome…!!

  • karen_venus on Oct 21, 2011

    i also wanted to write poems, but poems doesn’t like me at all :p

    (jowk)…

    nice writing (thumbs up)

  • zarina on Oct 21, 2011

    you must be very inspired when you compose this one..

    goodluck girl…take care :)

  • rajesh on Oct 21, 2011

    good poem and you did write so well…

  • iva75cpb on Oct 21, 2011

    Beautiful things, things we dream and long for are never real, unfortunately.

  • FX777222999 on Oct 22, 2011

    What a great image you are composing into a wonderful poem.

  • ittech on Oct 23, 2011

    nice dream like it

  • lovinglyoursjuny on Oct 31, 2011

    thanks for the comments guys :)

  • joe on Nov 21, 2011

    hoping dreams come true….

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