Poetry By Sourav RC.

When dark clouds cover the sky
Rain is ready to fall on tired earth
What picture draws your two wet eyes-
Does a dream arise – a thoughtful little birth?

When a religious monster murders a child
Carefree time brings the wind of death
A mother’s cry where the death has piled
How do you find your unquestionable faith?

When life becomes cold- and frightening
No words from heaven only scream of hell
Virtue is faded, fear tied up the wings
How will you live? No voice will tell.

And when vast clouds descend finally
Moment of joy, pleasure for earth divine
But no rain can wash off the sin – and sin there be
In life, in love – in every facet of you and mine. 

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  • Authoress Terry E. Lyle on Apr 24, 2010

    Awesome job and very visual.

  • Marie Antoinette on Apr 24, 2010

    Very strong piece, well done!

  • Atanacio on Apr 24, 2010

    very moving with a touch of haunt loved it

  • diamondpoet on Apr 24, 2010

    Wow that really was an awesome piece, and very well expressed, great job my friend.

  • Emma Green on Apr 24, 2010

    I thoroughly enjoyed this very strong piece. Very well expressed, good work.

  • giftarist on Apr 24, 2010

    Cool!

  • VTech on Apr 24, 2010

    Good Post

  • PR Mace on Apr 24, 2010

    Such strongly worded verses. Well done.

  • Goodselfme on Apr 24, 2010

    Done very purposeful.

  • maeraquel on Apr 24, 2010

    couldn’t have written it better.

  • Christine Ramsay on Apr 25, 2010

    A powerful and thought provoking piece. Well done.

    Christine

  • Petalm on Apr 25, 2010

    Excellent writing

  • Jimmy Shilaho on Apr 25, 2010

    A powerfully written poem, I love it Sourav.

  • Lord Banks on Apr 25, 2010

    Passionate and well crafted excellent. LB

  • CA Johnson on Apr 25, 2010

    This was a really powerful poem and I really enjoyed it.

  • neha80 on Apr 25, 2010

    Interesting post, just today i know more about it. Good subject selection for writing articles. Thanks for sharing this good one.

  • seoprofessional on Apr 26, 2010

    a very well written post

  • Eden Emersen on Apr 26, 2010

    Very profound thoughts from the viewpoint of an artist. . . thanks for sharing

  • deep blue on Apr 26, 2010

    A poetry well expressed.

  • sara20 on Apr 28, 2010

    Nice to read your Article, Keep writing more about it. Is is really Graceful and very well written skill. Thanks for sharing.

    Sara

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