I like the title of this poem. Good use of imagery and figurative language. keep up the good work

I don’t know if its a Dante scene or something of Joyce creeping from the descriptions of hell but it sure has that intense use of imagery again Frank…. hey! man it’s my bed T ha ha 00.55 great share cheers.

You’re the bomb! BBBBBBBBBB.. lol.

Your poem tells the true nature of war and what soldiers and citizens endure. It’s the saddest thing in the world.

“OK I can puke now with your vivid images….otherwise the poem was great in the flow and content, and you being so good with the imagery made me nauseous” Maggots…yuck, yuck!!!

this is the first poem about non love theme i have ever read

This description reminds me of the Picazzo painting of Guernica. I once asked my pupils at school to write a poem about this painting and they came up with very similar language and imagery in their work. Well done.

Christine

Simply great…will we ever stop fighting?

Simply stated! Sad but true, there have been wars since the beginning of man kind, and it won’t ever end.

Yet again, a poem with great imagery usage!

Well, that got my day off to a positive start!
Good job.
Thanks,
Clay

Oops I came back again…..”Why,why,why” I didn’t need to visualize maggots again. good writing with yucky content.

Great writing. I like this

A good writing style and information is certainly useful. For all readers continue to write such excellent articles. Thank you.

very good share

The poem is written very beautifully.. It captures the essence of war.

this is the frame captured poem including imaginary usage

this is the frame captured poem including imaginary usage

interesting subject for writing.

I would love to read a short horror story from you. You have such an intense way of thought and the description is always second to non!

Awesome poem.