And The Birds Flew

1hopefulman on Aug 17, 2010

Tags: broken friendships

Arguments egged on, can escalate into violence.

Friends
Lost in anger
Fighting over
Silly things
.
And the birds passed
Stopped
And picked their worms
.
Some
Saw the scene
And wagered seeds
.
Soon
Blood was spilling
Someone came
Asked some questions
.
And the birds flew

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krrymarie on Aug 17, 2010
nice poem!
Jenny Heart on Aug 17, 2010
Well done!
ashan1614 on Aug 17, 2010
We do tend to sweat the small stuff dwell on it until it escalates out of control.
Lex92 on Aug 17, 2010
Beautiful! birds always seem to fly away when you come near then lol
buenavida on Aug 17, 2010
It takes a lot of skill to be able to tell a story with so few words. Excellent piece of poetry.
pattiann on Aug 17, 2010
Beautiful poem
pattiann on Aug 17, 2010
Beautiful poem.
Ruby Hawk on Aug 17, 2010
well done,
Henry James on Aug 17, 2010
Good imagery
Raj the Tora on Aug 17, 2010
a tiny story in a beautiful poetry
PARAM on Aug 17, 2010
Lovely poem.
carissimi on Aug 18, 2010
wow
Lord Banks on Aug 18, 2010
A good comment on mankind! good work. LB
BC Doan on Aug 18, 2010
I like the images through your words!
The SMS Man on Aug 18, 2010
Very imaginative. Nice!
drelayaraja on Aug 18, 2010
Lovely poem Great story.
sandcastle on Aug 28, 2010
nice poem!
SharifaMcFarlane on Sep 11, 2010
Too bad people can’t just walk away from an argument. Good imagery.
1hopefulman on Sep 13, 2010
I am very honored that you all read this poem, thanks!
RAJEEV BHARGAVA on Sep 17, 2010
i took an instant liking to this poem. it is really well composed and i enjoyed reading it.
1hopefulman on Dec 7, 2010
Thanks Rajeev!
Phoenix Montoya on Jan 24, 2011
Nice message here, thanks. Another good job!

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