A love history of real life.

That night I went out to walk down the streets of the old town, was a very clear cold night, i reached the main road, a very long and wide street paving stone colors. The windows could see the gates that protected them and soft lights that illuminated my path.

The stars lit up with great force, seemed to light up the night among them, beautiful, titillating and glamorous. The moon was almost hidden, waning in the west, behind the houses downstream.

The street was deserted, it was midnight, only the smell of food escaping from broken homes whispering silence of solitude. Warm bread here, handmade tortillas over there, chiles tatemado, a little beyond was a fair smell odors that excite me, awakening in me the desire to eat something.

After walking a few meters, I came to a house with a wide corridor, the bank had some biscuits that seemed to want to be eaten, I stood staring a few seconds, when suddenly a presence made me react and turn. I felt a heat wave, emotions and feelings together. A bright and beautiful eyes looking at me smiling. Undaunted I watched, mesmerized, silenced. I felt like staying there, looking for the rest of my life, prettiest eyes had ever seen. A second was an eternity for me.

A voice called her almost immediately, just smiled and walked away, leaving me a cocktail of desire, desire to see her again, watching her eyes, her lips and her beautiful smile, a strong desire to falling hard for her.

Then undertook the way back down that street that led me to her existence, there were no smells, fresh no stars, no street, no windows, just that aroma of bread and her beautiful presence, her bright eyes in my disturbed mind, and then you, who did you even notice the blast that provoked in me.

And then you…

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  • Morgana on Aug 27, 2009

    Very beautiful and original. Lovely work, Romansky :)

  • Romansky on Aug 27, 2009

    Thank you lovely girl, i will track all my files here. I hope don“t loose the essence of love.

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