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Angelic Smile

Darla Cooke on Dec 5, 2009
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Love poem.

 

You have such a sweet angelic smile,

but you are the devil in disguise.

I sense danger when you come around,

yet I find it impossible to run away.

You tempt me like no other can,

my desire for you will not fade.

You have me shackled up in chains,

I am a prisoner of your love.

You haunt my every waking moment,

at night I dream only of you.

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  • ken bultman on Dec 5, 2009

    A devil-may-care attitude poem. Well done.

  • deep blue on Dec 5, 2009

    Well done. I was reminded of the devil in a blue dress by Walter Mosley.

  • drelayaraja on Dec 5, 2009

    Nice one. ^_^
    Back-to-back treat for the readers. Well done Darla.

  • K.Reshma on Dec 5, 2009

    Nice one

  • Judi Eddy on Dec 5, 2009

    Good work, enjoyed it. Judi x

  • ceegirl on Dec 5, 2009

    Great work

  • Starpisces on Dec 5, 2009

    Wow, Darla, well written again.

  • Michael Eboh on Dec 5, 2009

    I like it. Thanks a lot!

  • Fvikto on Dec 5, 2009

    i love this dala; i felt you were writing to me…

  • Milton H Peebles III on Dec 5, 2009

    Devilish
    Take Care, DreamSweet and let Your Heart Shine
    ~ milty

  • Linda Lori on Dec 5, 2009

    Seductive danger at its best! Great write!

  • LOVELYHONEY on Dec 5, 2009

    Who is the one?
    Who inspires you?
    To such elusive hallucinations
    In love

    I can’t say
    That I can be the one
    As we’ve never met,

    But if ever we do meet
    You can bet
    I will be the one
    You’d wished
    You had met

  • Themax on Dec 5, 2009

    very and swet,As ken said devil might love this piece !Thanks :)

  • Goodselfme on Dec 5, 2009

    Well composed write.

  • diamondpoet on Dec 5, 2009

    Great work.

  • Nisa West on Dec 5, 2009

    Nice poem Darla. I have an angelic smile in my life too! What emotions…

  • AlmaG on Dec 5, 2009

    Wonderful poem! I love it :)

  • ReggieLutz on Dec 5, 2009

    thanks for the share

  • Darlene McFarlane on Dec 5, 2009

    Another well written piece.

  • Maryanne09 on Dec 5, 2009

    Nicely written poem about Angelic Smile! Liked it! :)

  • xoxo on Dec 6, 2009

    Someone I know has this problem. Nice poem, Darla.

  • giftarist on Dec 6, 2009

    That was clever!

  • STEVE666 on Dec 7, 2009

    Great verses, Darla.

  • ladydryle on Dec 10, 2009

    Wow…nice darla, I’ve been through this also in the past…LOL

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