Anger eats us up if we hold onto it, so release it and be at peace!

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ANGER… LIKE WATER

Anger… like acid,

  dangerous and damaging,

  it eats the heart to death;

Anger… like iron,

  its hardness held firmly,

  rusts the soul;

Anger… like ice,

  cold, unfeeling,

  fractures the spirit;

Anger… like water,

  released,

  slips through your fingers;

Anger… when freed,

  evaporates,

  … like mist,

and brings peace of mind.

PTR April 20, 22, 2011

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  • CHIPMUNK on Apr 22, 2011

    I like it good one

  • elnavann on Apr 22, 2011

    Good – I like the different images of anger

  • Martin Kloess on Apr 23, 2011

    good work.TY.

  • Cyni1106 on Apr 24, 2011

    There are so many ways to discribe anger. Your work has a way to make you feel, as well as think. TY

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