Another Day

Daisy Peasblossom on Jun 2, 2009

Tags: Duties, Hope, morning, new day, Poetry, undone

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It’s that time again.

Morning,
And duties yet
Undone.

Morning,
A day with its
Song unsung.

Morning,
Hope creeps like
Mousie on the floor.

Morning
another day with
Time to explore.

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Comments (11)

QuinMonty86 on Jun 2, 2009
Aw, that was cute, Daisy.
Christine Ramsay on Jun 2, 2009
That’s lovely, Daisy. Well done.

Christine
Atanacio on Jun 2, 2009
wonderfully done and again the picture just tops it off
Joe Dorish on Jun 2, 2009
Cute poem.
Ruby Hawk on Jun 2, 2009
It’s the way I like to look at life, every day is a new day.
Karen Gross on Jun 2, 2009
Beautiful picture! I love the poem – every day starts as a clean slate. Have you read the Tweety Bird prayer that was revolving around the internet for awhile – it went something like “Thank you Lord that so far today I haven’t spent too much money, or eaten too much chocolate, ….. (a bunch of bad habits he hasn’t done today), but my alarm will be ringing in 5 minutes, and I’ll be getting up, so I’ll really need your help soon!”
Milton H Peebles III on Jun 2, 2009
Tis Good.

Take Care, DreamSweet and Let Your Heart Shine!
~ milty
Joie Schmidt on Jun 2, 2009
I like the consistent, steady rhythm of this piece – lovely*

Blessings.

Sincerely,

-Liane Schmidt.
julianhw on Jun 3, 2009
Nice – but it’s the ‘duties yet undone’ bit that gets me every day!
Kate Smedley on Jun 3, 2009
Nicely written poem Daisy.
PR Mace on Jun 5, 2009
Nicely done, short and so sweet.

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