Aquatic inkjets swimming.

Clouds hang like muddy prints on a sparsely used trail,
huge leaps, barely bridging one print to the next
touching on proud moulds,
to touch Santa’s hemline,
tendrils of solid dew pulsate, vainly for union.
A splayed, false eight fingered hand,
blowing limply against the current,
injecting pocket storms of sepia antiquity in its wake,
closed mushroom exoskeleton torpedo’s,
escape through the murky cover.
Forms reevaluating yet more forms.

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Comments (4)
  • jo oliver on Oct 4, 2008

    Nice poem!

  • mdegenhardt on Oct 4, 2008

    Your words successfully convey the sentiment of the write through a use of clear imagrey and a terrific flow. Michael

  • Liane Schmidt on Oct 4, 2008

    This is an incredible piece of art.

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • shaun simpson on Oct 5, 2008

    thanks for your comments. wasn’t sure if it really worked

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