The sad conclusion of what the state of the world in general might come to eventually as horrors of life become more common place.

Perhaps one of the darker poems I ever wrote.

As we think about the many emotions we feel.
Some sickening enough to make us lose a good meal.
Yet despite all those emotions, there is something that can occur from too much despair.
Eventually we grow immune to the troubles, the torment, we simply don’t care.
It is not for any lack of knowing something is wrong.
Yet the problems of the world are just singing the same song.

The fact is eventually something is going to break.
There is only so much that we take.
Where we are going to find that nothing surprises us.
That might not be a plus.
Where eventually we are just going to go through the motions.
When what has failed are all emotions.

Some have been grown all too used to the torment and the hate.
They have been resolved to quite the dismal fate.
Yet in many ways, healthier would be to break out in violent rage.
Rather than our emotions being locked in some unbreakable cage.
Yet it is hard to muster up the tears.
To think about the things of our fears.
In the end, we would sooner tear out our hair.
Then muster the strength to care.

The world falls apart before our eye
What was once a cause for outrage is now as common housefly.
So much has happened, so much pain.
But yet it just seems inevitable in our brain.
Torture, despair, torment, death.
All too common, almost like nearly taking a breath.
Our thoughts have been thrown out of tune.
Only so much pain before we grow immune.
Few things can cut our soul like a knife.
Apathy becomes our life.

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Comments (14)
  • aheed411 on Jan 19, 2012

    Expressive poem
    I love this

  • avissado on Jan 19, 2012

    nice poem

  • mphsglo on Jan 19, 2012

    It’s an illusion. Bad things are sure to happen, but, we can choose to see them as the end and lay down, or, see it as the beginning of something new. Hope.

  • jaihoji on Jan 19, 2012

    something unique i have read, thank you for sharing.

  • Martin Kloess on Jan 19, 2012

    good work

  • yes me on Jan 19, 2012

    Liked it cheers matt

  • SydneyJ on Jan 19, 2012

    Very nice

  • LoveDoctor on Jan 19, 2012

    A very passionate poem. Good work

  • erwinkennythomas on Jan 19, 2012

    movingly intense

  • LCM Linda on Jan 19, 2012

    Love this poem. Apathy dominates people easily when time passes, a poor thing to happen when aging.

  • Kristie Claar on Jan 20, 2012

    Fantastic work! Love it!

  • iva75cpb on Jan 20, 2012

    I don’t know about dark, but many truths there are in your poem. Bad things will always happen but we should not lose hope. Cheer up!

  • AliAhmad on Jan 20, 2012

    New information for me.. Thanks for sharing…

  • pruelpo on Jan 23, 2012

    Nice write-up dude.

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