Apparent Death

foxpete88 on Jul 13, 2011

I would remind the soul of the dead.

gray morning

alone in the silence

morning sun

Can you warm the cold heart

which was dissolved in grief

I feel neglected

isolated from the bright sunshine

sunny day for a lonely soul

I want to survive through this period

but I could not resist the will of nature

slowly but surely

sunshine starts to fade

always repeated every day

I would remind the soul of the dead

when removing your departure

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jaidadiz on Jul 13, 2011
nice share..
ashan1614 on Jul 13, 2011
I have experienced this feeling or misery first hand. Good share.
LTStajul on Jul 13, 2011
nice share once
iloisabel on Jul 13, 2011
i feel in deep misery whenever i remember my love ones passed away…it gave me a deep grief and it pains me a lot..thanks for sharing^_^
PartizAnka on Jul 13, 2011
good work!
Dreamy777 on Jul 13, 2011
Awesome poem
sambasivarao on Jul 13, 2011
Good share
princess yuna on Jul 14, 2011
good poem
reiny on Jul 14, 2011
it is suffering love?
Peace Poet on Jul 14, 2011
One of the best poems ever read by me. Best wishes.
Pearl Wilson on Jul 15, 2011
’sunny day for a lonely soul’: this image is so powerful. great read!
DR.VNS on Jul 15, 2011
great writing.
juliachild on Jul 18, 2011
great share…
Dreamy777 on Jul 18, 2011
great poem
Kristie Claar on Sep 22, 2011
great work

Hi there!