This is a poem I wrote when I was 10years old at school. We had a poetry competition and I won, the prize was it got published in a childrens poetry book. This was the first poem I ever wrote and many more followed. Please leave comments telling me what you think. It would be appreciated.
Snow, snow everywhere nothing but whiteness all around us
The ice is sparkling, shining bright
It might give you a little fright
The lonely wilderness is silent
Apart from the wind you hear
The waves are lashing, raging and burning
The iceberg is breaking like the sound of thunder
The deadly beauty of the ice shelf
Is such a wonderful thing
The beautiful fire dancing in the sky is like a rainbow burning.
That is a wonderful poem. Especially for a ten year old writer. It contains beautiful imagery and I really enjoyed it. The title suits the poem completely 
I will be adding you and hope that you might desire to read a little of my writing. I sure would like to know what you think of my work. Thank you
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