Simple poetry.

Bright shining stars seen from the earth,

that twinkles above the sky far far away,

that far, which has no ending,

the endless universe, limitless,

from where we can’t be seen,

can’t be figured out.

In this endless universe,

How should we define ourselves?

from the tiny particles of the earth,

to the far end of the galaxy.

What is our role in it?

What do we represent to the earth?

Are there any limits?

Or are we making the limits?

Same are our thoughts,

that we have within ourselves,

the endless, limitless thoughts,

which goes on forever,

like the earth to the sky,

there are no limitations,

there is no end to anything.

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  • Aiyanna on Nov 14, 2009

    Thought provoking!!! Really loved it :)

  • Kip Spleen on Nov 14, 2009

    Very abstract despite a specific focus. Good work.

  • Jenny Heart on Nov 14, 2009

    Great one!

  • cutedrishti8 on Nov 14, 2009

    Really a nice one..

  • wonder on Nov 14, 2009

    A thought provoking one, a great composition.

  • livemike on Nov 14, 2009

    Love poems like this…I have a few myself.Mankind and God are just two…Great piece…..

  • Pinaki Ghosh on Nov 14, 2009

    Really praiseworthy.

  • Goodselfme on Nov 14, 2009

    Well done!

  • Ted Marion on Nov 14, 2009

    Beautiful

  • drelayaraja on Nov 14, 2009

    No limits. Really a good one.

  • Alexander Jay Sheridan on Nov 15, 2009

    This poem left me thinking about infinity. Keep it up Priyanka :D

  • TroostAvenue on Nov 16, 2009

    Very nice. Will be following your work as a new Friend. Thank You.

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