Making precious memories together.

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Around the campfire we are sitting,

Roasting hot dogs and marshmallows.

Outdoors the sky has turned starry,

Up above a full moon shines bright.

Night creatures are on the prowl,

Darkness has engulfed the forest.

 

Telling ghost stories by the campfire,

Happy to be out in the wilderness,

Enjoying our special time together.

 

Crickets are chirping in the distance,

A lone wolf howls from far away.

Memories we are making here tonight,

Precious ones that will last forever.

Fire is beginning to die down now,

I am ready to sleep beneath the stars.

Rising very early the next morning,

Eager to face the brand new dawn.

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Comments (13)
  • clay hurtubise on Jul 7, 2009

    nice piece!
    Thanks,
    Clay

  • Brenda Nelson on Jul 7, 2009

    clever how you had it spell out your title.

  • Mark Gordon Brown on Jul 7, 2009

    Although we live in a common camping area, we are not much for camping ourselves, but you can sure smell people who have been around the campfire!

  • Hazel Crowther on Jul 7, 2009

    Sets the scene nicely.

  • goodselfme on Jul 7, 2009

    You brought the campfire experience to life with your words.

  • rajeev bhargava on Jul 7, 2009

    i really enjoyed reading this poem. the imagery is beautiful and as it’s read, the poem comes alive and the reader actually feels they are inside the forest. everyone can relate to this. brilliant work.

  • Milton H Peebles III on Jul 7, 2009

    Make me want to go camping. Very Good!

  • Tanya Wallace on Jul 7, 2009

    A very creative and original poem.Excellent work Darla.

  • Michael Eboh on Jul 7, 2009

    Wonderful. You got to borrow your style to me.

  • Joie Schmidt on Jul 8, 2009

    So nice and unique!

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • Ken Bultman on Jul 8, 2009

    Excellent piece creating a wish to get outdoors.

  • sheba on Jul 11, 2009

    Very good. I enjoyed reading this! Very moving! Thanks alot for sharing!

  • CutestPrincess on Jul 27, 2009

    very creative work…

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