Birth was the assignment for today.

Biological process
indicitive of moment in which
body and soul conjoin
into human being or other animal
as designated by genome.

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  • Pithom on Nov 20, 2009

    I’m sure some religious factions would find the idea of an animal having a ’soul’ contentious.

    I did like this poem. The conjoining of the material with the spiritual. I like the suggestion that ‘Arrival’ is mainly a physical/biological event, whilst the spirit or soul is a dormancy; its principality perhaps being ‘Leaving’ Life..

    A lot said with few words. Another nice write.

  • TroostAvenue on Nov 20, 2009

    I was going to say that the poem was coriously correct,but now I’m
    shamed by salaam’s detailed analysis.

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