A visit to the beach just before the rain.

AS I SAT ALONE UPON A BEACH

The whitecaps foam,

And the tide does dash,

Pipeline’s oblique,

And hits the shore at a slash;

Breezes gust,

The sound so soft,

Becomes a cry,

A loud thunderous cough;

Nature’s warriors,

Of shore, sand, and wave,

Take on the battle,

Giving all that they gave;

Clouds above lower,

Threatening this spectacle below,

While waves beat the shore,

Oblivious to the blow.

PTR June 7, 2011

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  • CHIPMUNK on Jun 8, 2011

    great

  • Dreamy777 on Jun 8, 2011

    nice work

  • Minister Marlene on Jun 8, 2011

    I suddenly wish I were at the beach! Great poem! Once again I hear the waves actually crashing in one of your poems. Tides dash..hit the shores with a slash! Wow!

  • Angela Ohm on Jun 8, 2011

    This is beautiful tankermone ! You give life to your words and you create wonderful images in my mind. Thank you for sharing.

    Angela

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