This is a poem that I thought of just a while I was typing these other poems I have. Tell your friends and family. Share my articles to all your social networks Thank you and send me some feedback good or bad.

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As the water move with the current

Leaves move with the air

As the finger points

The t,oes will curl

As the fist punch

The feet will kick

As the pen writes

The pencil wil erase

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  • pattiann on Aug 26, 2010

    You said you wanted feedback. I think your post is very good. The words flow easily.

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