As Two Hearts Embrace Surrender

Joie Schmidt on Jan 28, 2009

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For true love is exquisitely pure.

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Oh sweet melody
Oh sweet nectar
Rush, with conviction
Sing to me

Ignite the crimson in my heart
Illuminate the unknown stills of night

Captivate purple mountains
Rejuvenate lakes and shores
The flame of our waiting passion
Shines, a solid ore

Paint nights with endless rivers
Melt away the chill of brittle walls
With the warmth of true affections
As two hearts embrace surrender
And take, a final fall.

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Yovita Siswati on Jan 28, 2009
brilliant as always! very beautiful and passionate. I like it but I have difficulties in clicking the ‘I like’ button everytime I assess Triond using my cellphone
smoothe1 on Jan 28, 2009
I could see the images you painted with your words. Captivating poem.
rileyd on Jan 28, 2009
Beatiful as always.
seashell66 on Jan 28, 2009
I love the images!
Christine Ramsay on Jan 28, 2009
Beautiful work. You have such a way with words.

Christine
Darren Goad on Jan 28, 2009
Captivating!
BC Doan on Jan 28, 2009
Beautiful and vivid!
Eva Ohil on Jan 28, 2009
So expressive. I love the imagery you used. Exceptional! Thanks.
Kate Smedley on Jan 28, 2009
Beautiful and evocative
Kim Buck on Jan 28, 2009
Beautiful and powerful as always.
CA Johnson on Jan 28, 2009
You did another great job on this poem.
Will Gray on Jan 28, 2009
Excellent and beautiful as always. You are a true poet!
Jamie Puhi on Jan 28, 2009
So brilliant!
so amazingly brilliant.
Bravo!
Mary S Bithell on Jan 28, 2009
Thank you… This is beautiful!!!
May God Bless and Be With You Always…
…Mary
Westbrook on Jan 28, 2009
Thanks for sharing your thoughts. I enjoyed it.
Linda Lori on Jan 28, 2009
Very beautiful!
ShaFar on Jan 28, 2009
You are one of the best writers on Triond. You are very talented and blessed. I feel one day soon you will be very well known for your truly hard work. You create poems that touch many people.
Your writing is as beautiful as the rising sun. May God bless you and continue to guide your hand and thoughts.
S Air on Jan 28, 2009
Beautiful poem.
Betty Carew on Jan 28, 2009
Beautiful, just beautiful.
Lauren Axelrod on Jan 28, 2009
Breathtaking Liane. You have touched my emotions as well.
Morgana on Jan 28, 2009
Gorgeous picture and gorgeous poem.
nobert soloria bermosa on Jan 28, 2009
lovely as always,ooh i love the photo also,
Mercedes Selvira on Jan 28, 2009
Lovely as always, thoroughly infused with passion. Majic is right, you should publish a book of poetry; I would buy it, as would many other Trionders, at least
Dora on Jan 28, 2009
I like it. It’s romantic. I love romantic poems!
vonkiernan on Jan 28, 2009
im new to this and just chekking out poems!!!
this is fantastic wel dun!!!
you are inspirational..
maybe you cud comment on a few of my poems and tel me what you think ??
Twoface on Jan 28, 2009
I love the last two lines especially,”and take, a final fall” that just has so much meaning and is very deep. =)
Ruby Hawk on Jan 28, 2009
It reads well. I can see that you have put a lot of thought into it.
James DeVere on Jan 28, 2009
Loved the photo . j
Joni Keith on Jan 28, 2009
There is so much beauty to the flow of this poem. It’s as moving as anything I’ve read. The picture compliments your words. Stunning.
trishia on Jan 28, 2009
What an explosive expression of two hearts uniting. The picture is beautiful! as it adds a flare to it all.
Riley Themend on Jan 28, 2009
I like all of the imagery you used to create this piece. It is very beautiful
S M Blomker on Jan 28, 2009
Feelings can be so strong, even by the words that are spokem. I like this very much.
Inna Tysoe on Jan 29, 2009
Romantic as always.

Thanks,

Inna
mysticdave on Jan 29, 2009
Very passionate and beautiful poem.
Anne Lyken Garner on Jan 29, 2009
I liked this one, perhaps more than I’ve liked all the others you’ve done (which I’ve read). It maintains the same pace throughout. The added ‘refrain’ in the middle serves it well too.

The structure is good, and the rhythm easy to keep up with.
Lily River on Jan 29, 2009
I agree with Majic! Your poem was absolutely lovely as usual! I want a copy of your first book. Keep on writing.
IreniaPehuajo on Jan 29, 2009
Lovely image for a charming poem.
I liked it
Bye
Anna Ski on Jan 29, 2009
A very good poem with heart and soul.

Very well done.
JessikahLashes on Jan 29, 2009
This is beautifully written, weldone!
papaleng on Jan 29, 2009
Simply an outstanding piece, so much beauty to the flow of the poem.
dillydally on Jan 29, 2009
A really emotional piece…brought a tear to my eye…I inspire to eventually write poetry like this!
dillydally on Jan 29, 2009
Sorry *aspire not inspire!
MarleeKnows on Jan 30, 2009
Simple and beautiful.
F J McCarthy on Jan 30, 2009
Very lovely poem, Your style is truly poetic, i hope someday that I too could write with such grace. Thank you far being a beautiful inspiration.
YolieM on Jan 30, 2009
Very nice piece. You have a wonderful way with words.
gianne on Jan 30, 2009
I LOVE this!
Darlene McFarlane on Jan 30, 2009
What a fantastic piece of writing! I totally loved it.
Poetic Enigma on Jan 31, 2009
This is a beautiful,
very amazing, and terrificly written,
another masterpiece (:
eddiego65 on Jan 31, 2009
Lovely images of true love. Absolutely amazing!
AC Hamilton III on Jan 31, 2009
Very sweetly portrayed. Written in the same simplicity and depth as true love untainted by deceit.

Great job!

AC
Juhls on Jan 31, 2009
Sweet, beautiful, passionate. Well done!

Peace,

Julesita
Brian Daniel Stankich on Jan 31, 2009
Nice spirit of sacrifice and considering the other better than yourself.

Brian
Sandra Tapia on Feb 6, 2009
I know a Poe fan when I see one. Makes for an exquisite writer.
Michele Cameron Drew on Feb 12, 2009
Beautifully done, dear lady, as always. The photo you have chosen in a fine compliment to your wonderful imagery and the flow is divine.

-M

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