Observing a little one sleeping.

Your skin smooth, hair not too long,

Feel asleep in arms, as hummed a song,

Lay upon the blanket, so quiet and still,

A breeze from fan, you do slightly feel,

No movement, only slight twitch of an eye,

Not even as motorcycle, roared on by,

Way into beautiful dreamland you do seep,

I watched as my Grandson, lay there and sleep…

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Comments (8)
  • DA Cournean on Jul 3, 2009

    Little angel!!!

  • Alistair Briggs on Jul 3, 2009

    Well written. :)

  • Nisa West on Jul 3, 2009

    So precious! What a love…

  • clay hurtubise on Jul 3, 2009

    Cute piece.
    Thanks,
    Clay

  • Mr Ghaz on Jul 3, 2009

    so cute..this is great and wonderful LOV..excellent presentation..I LIKED it. Thanx for sharing

  • princess serenity on Jul 4, 2009

    How cute!
    Hopes he reads this someday! :D

  • Daisy Peasblossom on Jul 4, 2009

    They are so precious–and they grow so fast.

  • Jamie Myles on Jul 11, 2009

    Touched my heart.

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