Stargazing for lovers.


image via wunderphotos by killyboy

When Venus is below the moon there’s an aura of love in the air
And it makes two lovers connect as they view the sky everywhere.
As time goes by the two nighttime orbs will come together and kiss
And fill young couples’ hearts with longing and astronomical bliss.

Mr. Moon has powers to alter tides and the moods of people in love.
Venus, the Goddess of Love, can make the heart soar high above.
When the two get together there’s nothing to do but give in to desire
And let your one and only set your loving heart on fire. 

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  • ashan1614 on Apr 21, 2010

    Star gazing and wathing the sun set – two of my favorite things to do so long as I’m with the right person. :)

  • Wilbart26 on Apr 21, 2010

    like it

  • diamondpoet on Apr 21, 2010

    Very beautiful post Ken you old romatice.

  • johnnydod on Apr 21, 2010

    Ken ! you old romantic you..

  • Uma Shankari on Apr 21, 2010

    Enjoyable expressions of love.

  • Guy Hogan on Apr 21, 2010

    I like this little ditty. It makes me feel young again.

  • pearl2010 on Apr 21, 2010

    Interesting to read. I like Venus.

  • Marie Antoinette on Apr 21, 2010

    Beautiful, I love the moon and this universe, liked it a lot.

  • LoveDoctor on Apr 21, 2010

    My heart is always full of bliss. I really loved this poem especially the title. nice work.

  • Darla Cooke on Apr 21, 2010

    Lovely poem!

  • Christine Ramsay on Apr 21, 2010

    I didn’t realise you were so romantic, Ken. This is a beautiful piece and a great picture to go with it.

    Christine

  • wonder on Apr 21, 2010

    I thought people levitated only during meditation, now they can soar with love. A great discovery,interesting poem and picture. A parachute to come down also.

  • Brenda Nelson on Apr 21, 2010

    The moon in the country is twice as bright as the moon in the city.

  • Ruby Hawk on Apr 21, 2010

    Ken, so true, nothing is so romantic as the night sky. It’s magic to lovers.

  • Emma Green on Apr 21, 2010

    Romantic in everyway you are.

  • Lady Sunshine on Apr 21, 2010

    How romantic, Ken. This is beautiful. Be still my beating heart.

  • Vikram Chhabra on Apr 21, 2010

    Written from the heart!

  • Debra. on Apr 21, 2010

    Such a peaceful romantic piece, Ken!! The universe and love…

  • Tulan on Apr 21, 2010

    Very romantic, a moonlit, starry night.

  • Shirley Shuler on Apr 21, 2010

    How very romantic, Ken.

  • Goodselfme on Apr 21, 2010

    Very nicely penned prose.

  • VTech on Apr 22, 2010

    excellent , thanks for sharing.

  • Lord Banks on Apr 22, 2010

    I like to star gaze, and watch high clouds on a summers day with a cold Chardonnay and hot company, Great work Ken. LB

  • lillyrose on Apr 22, 2010

    wow… great words… I loved this bit! astronomical bliss

  • Ask Cash on Apr 22, 2010

    Ah me, young love…as old as the stars, the moon and other astronomical elements of the night sky.

  • sloanie on Apr 22, 2010

    Excellent poem I enjoyed reading it, moonlit starry nights
    are special .

  • Linley Alexander on Apr 23, 2010

    Sweet write. I enjoy your words.

  • deep blue on Apr 24, 2010

    Excellent read. I know a good poetry when I read one.

  • Authoress Terry E. Lyle on Apr 24, 2010

    Star gazing is one of my favorite past times, just love it and always wish I could possible witness a ufo as long as they don’t grab me. :)

  • PR Mace on Apr 24, 2010

    Well if this rain will ever let up I must take my husband out star gazing. Love this one, Ken.

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