This is dedicated to Miss Cornelie and her family. Also all my earnings here will go to charity, so another young life and be saved. Please don’t bother to leave comments on how you like the poem, but instead leave special messages to Miss Cornelie and her family. Thank you.

At age two, gives birth to life.
What a miracle indeed.
At a young age to give just a gift,
To another person in need

I can see it so clearly,
For my crystal ball told me so,
That these two loving sisters,
Will be bonded together like one.

Even though they are both so young,
They will grow up to know,
That one could not have survive
Without the other one.

I can see the oldest one saying,
To the other who is only two,
“I will forever be your best big sis,
For you gave me another chance to live.”

“I will forever protect you from harm,
For you I wouldn’t have this chance,
To share my life with you
And all the family together too.”

I can see those sharing grand memories,
Of growing old together.
To Miss Cornelia and her family,
Have a happy long life together

For the one that’s only two,
Please tell her she is a hero.
For the one that’s only five,
Please tell her that I see her
Living a very long happy life.

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  • payge on Mar 8, 2009

    Heros come in all different shapes and sizes,this hero is only 2 year old. This event in their lives will only strenghten the sister bond and the love they have for the other.Good luck to Ms Cornelie and her family,and hope for better times to come for the family.

  • Lewis on Mar 8, 2009

    Who are these children?

  • Darla Smith on Mar 8, 2009

    My best wishes are for Miss Cornelie and her family.

  • Serenity Jones on Mar 8, 2009

    Mesa wishin’ yousa all the best.

  • Amsky on Mar 8, 2009

    Only few people like you, knows how to help others even in a simple way. I hope that miss cornelia will feel the love and concern of her friends here in Triond. This will ease or lessen the pain that she is having right now. I gave her my greatest wish that her daughter will get well soon and start to enjoy life again…

  • Mr Ghaz on Mar 8, 2009

    That was so emotional. ..God always be with you. All d best.

  • Anne McNew on Mar 9, 2009

    How nice of you to think about this. God bless you…

  • Kellee Kell on Mar 9, 2009

    What a brilliant thought. My heart goes out for Cornelia and her daughter.

    It’s a tragic that any child should have to endure such suffering.

  • Mervin on Mar 9, 2009

    May God Bless Miss Cornelia and her family

  • TOPELECTRICIAN on Mar 9, 2009

    beautiful poem…i talked to miss cornelia late at night around 2-3am when she was at the hospital….touching!

  • Monkeywithagun on Mar 9, 2009

    You’re a good person, Tammy. It is wonderful to see. I will visit Miss Cornelia straight away.

  • lh on Mar 9, 2009

    lh

  • Morgana on Mar 9, 2009

    I wish nothing but the best for Cornelia and her Family. May everything be well and God bless them too.

  • postpunkpixie on Mar 11, 2009

    Beatiful and very touching. Very noble of you to donate your profits to charity, hope you get masses. :) I’ll view this piece as often as I can.

  • Karelee on Mar 19, 2009

    What a wonderful blessing that a sibling can save the other.. they will be more than just sisters.

    Karelee

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