The best part of waking up is love at first light.

I was greeted by the sun this morning

and she gave me a warm kiss,

Like being in heat’s proximity 

on a cold winter day

she sent a shiver through my body

awakening my mind.

I had thoughts of her submission

and how difficult it was initially

but eventually we arrived at a place

where our spirits touched flesh.

We committed ourselves,

conformity became  

  the tightest configuration

possible.

Her acceptance of me

  and my willingness

to proceed

 were in perfect balance,

like shades of grey that fade

when blackness sees light.

This morning we were

  joined at the edge

    of dawn’s existence.

And I was greeted

by the warmest kiss imaginable

all day long, from creation

to my awakening

I yearned for night

hoping for the possibility

 to love at first light

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  • Guy Hogan on Dec 8, 2010

    There is nothing like love in the morning.

  • Sexyhood03 on Dec 8, 2010

    beautifuly done. in the morning the sun will be there ha

  • diamondpoet on Dec 9, 2010

    Wow I don’t know why I haven’t received a copy of your first book, because you leave me speechless.

  • roehill on Dec 9, 2010

    I love your work. Poem is beautiful.

  • roehill on Dec 9, 2010

    Beautiful poem.

  • sandcastle on Dec 10, 2010

    Beautiful !

  • Goodselfme on Dec 10, 2010

    There are too many favorite parts of this to mention them all. So well composed with lively words chosen for everything needed to share here. thank you for this delight!

  • lillyrose on Dec 11, 2010

    Your love is strong and shows in this wonderful poem!

  • THEMADTYPER on Jan 5, 2011

    This is a very good poem man I would like for you to go through a couple of mine to give me some pointers if you don’t mine!

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