When somebody has been suffering, there is no greater feeling than seeing them at peace.

I have never seen you look so lovely

never seen you be in so much peace

your tensions had gone

they had been released

it was the nicest image

that you could possibly have given me

after seeing you in so much pain

it is the best memory in my brain

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  • Jordan Sawchuk on Aug 28, 2010

    I enjoyed this, I love these short poems that tell so much with so few words

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