At This Moment

carissimi on Nov 9, 2010

Tags: Angels, carissimi, esmeralda, not enemies, not friends, Sands, stay away from me, time, truth, you lied to me

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Chap 11 – fictional
hero needs to face his dark side to truly walk into the light
Esmeralda, has finally has let him go and faced the fact
that he is what he is and with a broken heart accepted that he will never be the man she hoped, prayed for, and longed for her whole life. She wished no ill will toward him. No matter how many stones he threw at her and no matter how far the ripples of those stones went, she has no ill will towards him. She knew and she felt it her heart heal. She was beginning to feel whole again. There was a inner quietness that filled her. She got up and started to walk. By herself, but then again, that is what she is used to. When difficult times come to her, through those times she never had someone to walk beside her. Why change things now?

at this moment

and in this time

there is nothing

you can say

that will make me believe

i could say the time has passed

but that would be a lie

for the sands have slipped through

and the time that has passed

whether accidentally or inadvertently

there was never any sands

placed aside for you and me

so there was never a time

a time for you and me

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Comments (12)

Brewed Coffee on Nov 9, 2010
That is a sad one. But I love it nonetheless. Lovely poem as always!
PSingh1990 on Nov 9, 2010
Nice Share.
Joie Schmidt on Nov 9, 2010
Very nice*

Blessings.

Sincerely,

-Joie Schmidt.
Ukrainian on Nov 9, 2010
A touching nice poem.
crisdiwata on Nov 9, 2010
sad tone but lovely indeed. love hurts but you must learn to move on and let go.
awesome11 on Nov 10, 2010
Nice write dear ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
tankermone on Nov 10, 2010
Lonely, but a great poem!
Cloudydays on Nov 10, 2010
I’m glad you’re writing again, you haven’t written in a while.
Raj the Tora on Nov 10, 2010
very nice. Thanks for coming back strongly Carissimi
Starpisces on Nov 10, 2010
at this moment, I would like to say, this poem is nice and nice to have you around again, dear.
Adelnica Amor R. Izon on Nov 10, 2010
ouch
Phoenix Montoya on Nov 10, 2010
Beautiful write. Such heartfelt lines.

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