A lazy afternoon at my favorite coffee shop.

Multiple muffled conversations
oscillate under a veil of sound,
rhythms and reticent murmurs weave
threads of reserve around melodies
and street noise from doors wide open.

Fitful rain falls outside on gray streets,
languid pools of procrastination
flow from table to table inside
around feet of coffeehouse patrons,
layers of lassitude cloak this day.

Luscious redolence of roasting beans
floats lightly in open entryway
hangs heavy over tables and chairs,
fingers flow slowly in final dance
over letters that lay down in lines.

Casey Mack (2011)

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  • Katie Marie on Sep 28, 2011

    I love alliteration! This is a wonderful read. I particularly liked the ‘pools of procrastination’ around patrons feet due to the rain outside.

  • stryka1966 on Oct 4, 2011

    Your creative talent is very much on display here – loved it

  • J L Carey Jr on Oct 4, 2011

    Well done. I like how you ended the piece also.

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