Attitude

dabomb on Jul 29, 2008

Tags: amaze, attitude, love, obsess, rebuke

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How your attitude can affect your life.

We are all secluded by our attitude

And reconciled because of our attitude

We are all obsessed by our attitude

And amazed because of our attitude

We are all rebuked by our attitude

And admired because of our attitude

And loved for our attitude

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Comments (13)

charlie on Jul 29, 2008
I like this poem
Darlene McFarlane on Jul 29, 2008
I like it too.
ione :) on Jul 29, 2008
count me in!
nice poem
PR Mace on Jul 29, 2008
That one I liked. It had attitude. Good job. Keep working on your writing.
atherios on Jul 29, 2008
i really liked the poem, it sums up people in general’s life with their attitude, keep your head up.
amie on Jul 31, 2008
I really enjoyed reading this poem. It sum up how people are presented in everything they do and how it revolves around attitude. Nice work.
Lost in Arizona on Aug 2, 2008
Very clever and poignant. You are who you represent. Keep writing.
lynn high on Aug 3, 2008
Nice job. It’s definetly true that attitude contributes to everything.
visionvixen on Aug 3, 2008
this is more than a great poem there is no word for it but the truth keep writting we needs poets that aren’t scared to speak the truth but be honsest
eunice tan on Aug 3, 2008
it’s so true! great thought!
Mack on Aug 8, 2008
so true, nice poem
M F Littles on Aug 30, 2008
The repetition clearly drives the point home. Good job!
Gerlaine on Sep 15, 2008
Truer words have never been spoken! ~G

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