A Haiku Collection on Autumn.

Haiku 1

autumn morning
the park,a lone child watches
the squirrels frolic




Haiku 2

in autumn
do damp spirits cause
the moldy sky?


Haiku 3


autumn gloom
a widow
trims the scented candle’s wick



Haiku 4

autumn, in the park,
the wind and the fallen leaves
play merry go round


Haiku 5

in the rhythm
of the autumn rain
the frogs frolic out of the pond



Haiku 6

autumn festival
celebrating the nudity
of the trees

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  • powerlogic on Nov 14, 2010

    Thanks for this beautiful poem…love it.

  • Larry Fish on Nov 14, 2010

    Really enjoyed reading this poem.

  • Cloudydays on Nov 14, 2010

    Lots of great poems there, nice job! I don’t even remember how to write haikus anymore I think.. was it like 5-7-5 syllables or something? Lol..

  • AJ Garcia on Nov 14, 2010

    Nice piece, sandy. :)

  • Joseph Parks on Nov 14, 2010

    These are great. I love the simplicity of Haikus!

  • Ranjan Mathews on Nov 14, 2010

    Autumn gusts sneeze
    Flattening sandcastles agog
    Agony croaks oecho the grog.

  • Ukrainian on Nov 14, 2010

    Beautiful haiku! My favourite ones are # 1 and # 6.

  • Rhodora Bande on Nov 14, 2010

    I’ve only experienced autumn in movies and in books. Your haikus allowed me to see some pictures of autumn. Thanks.

  • Jimmy Shilaho on Nov 14, 2010

    Beautiful pieces.

  • Dee Gold on Nov 14, 2010

    cool pic and haikus

  • Adelnica Amor R. Izon on Nov 14, 2010

    mesmerizing…

  • Christine Ramsay on Nov 14, 2010

    What a beautiful collection of haikus. They describe the autumn perfectly. Well done.

    Christine

  • awesome11 on Nov 14, 2010

    Nice write dear ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

  • papaleng on Nov 15, 2010

    expressive Hailus.

  • The Quail 1957 on Nov 15, 2010

    Cool post

  • steelvern on Nov 15, 2010

    nice poem, nice autumn pictures. I love the squirrel.

  • Brewed Coffee on Nov 16, 2010

    Very vivid images that make me close my eyes and try to picture them. Autumn is a nice season….I like the changing colors of the leaves.

  • crisdiwata on Nov 16, 2010

    Really like your haikus, hope we could have four seasons here in the Philippines too. :)

  • dino renaldo on Nov 23, 2010

    nice share

  • SimplyShash on Nov 27, 2010

    The poet in you is marvellous. Congrats for these wonderfully knitted words.

  • s j tubrazy on Nov 28, 2010

    sandcastle i really enjoy this , plz publish more

  • Magic Quill on Dec 1, 2010

    you are very talented

  • aryanprakash90 on Dec 2, 2010

    Beautiful piece….:)

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