Fall colors.

Autumn colors drench
Saturation overwhelms
Lost in fall foliage

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  • Jenny Heart on Nov 1, 2009

    Great wording!

  • johnnydod on Nov 1, 2009

    Sunshine you and your colours I love them all … nice piece

  • Papa Sparks on Nov 1, 2009

    I like your usage of “drench” and “saturation” — very strong words for this poem.

  • martinpm on Nov 1, 2009

    I agree with everyone, beautifully laid words

  • Sourav on Nov 1, 2009

    Wonderful poem.

  • Christine Ramsay on Nov 1, 2009

    A lovely description of Autumn. Well done.

    Christine

  • ken bultman on Nov 1, 2009

    Your haiku is as beautiful as the image it describes. Great job.

  • deep blue on Nov 1, 2009

    Nice words of wisdom.

  • Shirley Shuler on Nov 1, 2009

    Hi Lady Sunshine, you describe fall so beautifully, love the picture!

  • Lostash on Nov 1, 2009

    Lovely!

  • Themax on Nov 1, 2009

    Reminds me those beautiful days of life!!
    Thanks and keep posting:)

  • Teves on Nov 2, 2009

    Wow nature…

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